I really like how this one came out. There’s a little bit more of a flow, which also takes on a much darker perspective that would never be considered when looking at the book as a whole. It’s amazing how picking and choosing certain words can make something out of seemingly nothing.

Economy, Page 2

Should I keep going? Am I wasting my time? Am I inspiring you to write your own? Do you want to submit one to me? Be honest. I can handle criticism; I made it through my MFA program, after all. How else will I get better? How else will we get better? Let me know what you think!