These are starting to get weird now. The first thing I noticed on this page was the use of first-person, and I knew I wanted to play on that. I’ve been wanting to focus on the verbs too, because when they’re strong enough, they can carry an entire story.
Here, I tried to highlight both, and I think it worked out. I don’t know if there’s a story to this, because it’s definitely the most poetic erasure I’ve done so far. You be the judge.
Walden Erasures, Page 11