Did you miss these? I’m sure you did. I know I did. I’m starting to realize with these erasures that I don’t have to use something from every paragraph. If the erasure ends after the first two paragraphs, it’s okay to eliminate the next two.
Don’t force the story. If it feels like it’s come to an end, let it end. I’m usually terrible with endings, never knowing where or how to end a story, so I think these will help for future stories. I’m definitely interested to see what you guys think of this one.
Walden Erasures, Page 12